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Re: Mastermind feat. Rhianna-Run this town 2 freestyle (my rap)
Heh...OK. Constructive criticism.
Your flow is off on several occasions. Rhymes were simple, which if this is an off the dome freestyle is fine, but it sounded to me like it was written.
All that being said, I really hope you stick with it dude. When I first started rapping I was awful. In fact I have some really really bad tracks I made when I was 13 or 14 still on my computer. So keep at it, listen to the best emcees, write a lot, rap a lot, and keep it real.
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