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Old 06-26-2008, 05:57 PM   #30
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Re: Nimbotix - a story Tails is making, feedback is highly appreciated

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3 A's and 1 D (how i hate Mythology and world literature)
thats why i thought you didnt like mythology
lol even through the critisism you can tell most of us like it so far
...but one thing nags me, no one wants to be the lame character, but someone is eventually gonna be lame, isnt there? If their isnt thats cool, but, i'm NOT volunteering for it,is there gonna be a lame person?

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So let it be done,
To kill the First Born Pharoh's Son,
I'm Creeping Death!"
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Blackend roar, Massive roar, Fills the crumbling sky, Shattered goal, Fills a soul with a Ruthless Cry"
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